The scars have memories

by xo kisses xo   Apr 19, 2007


Theres scars on her arm
left from thought of you
hiding all the feelings
that nobody knew

the scars have memories
each one has its own
they're there because
you left her alone

with nothing left
but a broken heart
the day you left
she fell apart

she made a final cut
the last one she'd make
said goodbye to his love
with the last breath she'd take

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  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Omg very strong this is really good i know i keep saying tha but they all are lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey, first of asll thank you for your comment. Now about the poem, i really enjoyed the emotion in the poem. It's a sad topic of self harm and suicide, its filled with emotion and is really heartfelt. Youve got a kinda story inside with your words, i very sad story at that. Your flow and structure weree both ok. None of the rhymes seemed forced at any point, and you had a good rhyme scheme going on. To improve i suggest you use punctuation in your work, i think taht would help the poem loads. Other then that a good read. Keep writing. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy

    Buh-oo-ti-ful

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was amazing!!!! great job!... drew told me he read this one, and he wanted me to write on here that he liked it a lot!! haha... but yeah 5/5 from me, and youre amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by cindy Maahs

    Wow very powerful makes me want to cry in a good way if that makes sense. I feel the pain and understand. Very well written!

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