I like, i feel with ya. could not have said it any better!!

"She wishes he will realize all the pain he's caused.

But until he does she'll let these tears of mascara fall"

I LOVE THiS LiNE SO MUCH
XOXO

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Well it is a good poem. it shows how the person in the poem is upset and hurt.

but you repeated, change that it wil be a really great poem

4/5

This is a great poem. I love the way you wrote it and what the poem means. And I completely understand you.

It was acually pretty sweet and something people wouldn't really notice.

I like how you portray this.I can visualize the mascara tears rolling down the cheeks.It is asad write indeed.I'm sure lots of people can relate to ur poem.It was certainly a delightful to read

Excellent Job
5/5