Very good, and strongly emotional. It meant a lot to me as well. Thank you!

Your poem seemed very personal, like it came from the heart. I liked it. Keep up the good work!

I also wanted to add that my teenage years was exactly what you discribed. I havent talked to my parents in months/years for my father. I hope what you wrote is only in your head and not reality. Good luck with your poetry, and life.

Omg ... its so deep
so... i dont know how to say it, there are no words to express this feeling
there is too much in this poem
which makes me sad
you gave me new inspiration for a new poem...
thank you
but i still hope everything will go better at home for you

This was extremely well written, i feel that this was so emotional and powerful, yet so sad, i hope ou dont really feel like this because people especially people with extraordinary talent deserve alot. I feel the title being in the poem worked well at it linked them both together and the laguage was so well expressed.

When i read a poem and feel for the writer i can start to understand how the poem works this was very good :D

xxx alex xxx