Blown Away

by Nick who Plays Pool   Apr 19, 2007


Everyday, a gust of wind blows
Across the land, as far as it may go
And as it blows, the wind erodes
Our planet away, till it finally decays.

A whirlwind, shall ravage the land
Tearing up the ground, and tossing up trees
Destroying the planet, as we see it be
Becoming nothing, but a wasteland.

As time carries on, we'll soon decline
The world will be, left behind
Everyday, shall be blown away
Until the day, the Earth is blown away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laloser05

    I really wish i could have written so well when i was 12.
    I read your profile after i read one of your poems, and i refuse to believe that you're 12.
    You're not really. You can't be. You're too good.

    Anyways, 5/5 - superb - yet again =)
    keep it up
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow.. I love it.. Great poem. 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by silence kills

    Gahh :D i really like your style of writing, it's interesting 5/5 as always

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Another great one Nick =) 5/5 like always =D
    Keep up the great work and remember your care about ^.^
    Hugs, Rhea

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Grunt

    Good poem kinda reminds me of Final Fantasy V lol

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