There is this man, whose all alone
It has been that way for years
For the place he calls home
Is a memorial for her tears.
-----
^ This stanza seems as if it has too many words, I guess.. ? Lol. I think it would sound a bit better like :
" There's this man, all alone,
it's been this way for years.
For, the place he calls home,
is her memorial of tears."
--------
"She thought he'd always understand
And she'd never feel out of place"
-----
^ The word feel doesn't go with stanza. I think it would sound better with the word fall, or be.
-------
"It is 3 in the morning, he's not there
She is tired of his lies"
-----
^ The last line I think would sound better like " And, she's tired of his lies."
--------
"He can barely even talk."
-----
^ I think you should add the word "as" at the beginning.
-------

This was a really sad poem. And, though I think that a few things would sound better, I loved this poem. I hope you don't take the above the wrong way. I don't mean it in a bad way, eh. Because, this is like one of the best poems I've read today. Even with it's little "problems" it's amazing, and it has a lot of meaning and potential.

GREAT JOB!
4/5

That is really good. there are some grammer problems. but otherwise it is really good. keep it up.