by Kristina Apr 20, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I wanna play guitar, |
by Sole
Another awesome poem. Slightly more shallow and positive.. but in a good way! It just came across as a really relaxed and cool piece of modern ppetry. I think you should take off 'for me' on the last line, that way I think it would flow slightly better. It would also be excellent if integrated into a song. |
That was good and it said everything i would have said |
by Xx.Lovely.xX
<3 Love It ! |
Cute poem.. I liked the message sometimes the things that we love to do the most are the things that are the harders to do for a living. However if you really love to do these kinds of things I really hope that you keep trying and never let anything get in the way of your dreams. |
Make is big someday = Make it big someday |