This is a really good poem. You did a good job!! 5/5

~Chelsea

It's simple.
That's the first word that came into my mind.
Everyone else had this complicated poem.
And yours was "simple"
It's amazing how yours stood out.
5/5

This poem was really simple but i liked it. it showed what you want most. I liked the flow really great. Good effort here. ~mel

Simple yet great........ you have a talent with words and you know how to write the best poem, very talented.......... keep it up
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

I also gave this one 4/5 because of the flow being off again. but you still did a wonderful job writing it and i hope you achieve your dream. good luck!

I can relate! I play guitar too but anyways i thought some spots needed work with repitition and what not

I like this one. Again the flow was a little of but, it is amazing how this simple poem, stands out against all the others. 4/5 You did a great job, keep it up, and good luck with your dreams.

Haha awesome poem...I know the feeling. I want to be a musician/singer myself someday and I know the desire for the fame and everything...although I myself don't want to be on MTV...too commercial lol. Anywho, good piece, although some constructive criticism I have to offer is to sometimes spice up your language to make your poems a bit deeper. Of course thats your personal creative choice. Great job!

It was ok i idn't like it much...i was kind've fun to read...the form was good though and the wording was alright,,,i'm just not uch for poems that don't hold alot of emotion...
Jonda

Make is big someday = Make it big someday

The flow was off, and by all means it was not the best poem that I have ever read, but I still understand where you are coming from, and I still was dragged into reading the poem and I wouldn't be able to stop. Your words seem so vivid and real, it's hard to pull away.

Good poem, Nice meaning.

5/5
~Stephen White

Cute poem.. I liked the message sometimes the things that we love to do the most are the things that are the harders to do for a living. However if you really love to do these kinds of things I really hope that you keep trying and never let anything get in the way of your dreams.

<3 Love It !

That was good and it said everything i would have said

Another awesome poem. Slightly more shallow and positive.. but in a good way! It just came across as a really relaxed and cool piece of modern ppetry. I think you should take off 'for me' on the last line, that way I think it would flow slightly better. It would also be excellent if integrated into a song.

Sole. x