Wow... um, that was strong for me to read. Though it was fantastic! =]
Fix a few things though:

"It's to hard of a habit to drop."
^ It should be "too".

"Of the words he mouth couldn't say."
^ It should be "her" - I hope... =/
Lmao.

Wonderful job girlie! 5/5
Lush you!
Stephanie Lynn .+.