I can totally relate to this poem, i love the description just needs a little more flow to me, but anyhow 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Thank u so much Paul for ur appreciation.
Hope is the only thing that can help us carry on in our little world of pain and remorse, i just wish the best of everything happen to everyone in the world.

i will definitely go for reading urs !!

bye n take care
Superna

WOW that was an amazing poem extremely well written and very sad , I feel your pain and your heartache ,I know where you been and been there to, life isn't easy when you go about it alone, that someone that you long for, must also understand where you have been and what you have been through, before they can truly understand you and accept you for who you are, love your poem , touched my heart, and the ending , got me,,,,,,,,,,
Oh lord! give me a love
who is true
and can wipe away all my blue
though i know this kind of people are very few
in this formal world which i can view
your friend Tracy d 5/5 , oh what a pleasure it was to read, take care