Stars

This poem was so sweet :D! You had an excellent choice of words as well! I've always loved stars, and you portrayed them with great truth. My favorite line was:

Gaurdians of the night protect me from staying up tonight

Great job, and thanks for the comment! Keep it up, 5/5

Hatori
The Illusionist

I must say pretty good but like i said i judge people on how well its put together and you put it together in your own way and i cant take away for that the only thing i didnt see is that when i read it i felt nothing like it ment nothing to me i dont know why though... now i have to wonder if poems come from the soul basicly then you eather put no feeling into making this one or you have a feeling that i cant replicate to know how you felt when writing it but since im not going to take points away for that ill just give you... a five i was an exallent peom but i wont be this easy all the time
Mark

I like it. It is just so interesting, I never really saw stars to be like what you described them to be.

Well i agree with the rest of the members votes. this poem was excellent! well done.

5/5 David

Good poem i really like itt