I love the opening lines you use....

Looking at the stars feels so right, on this night.
They take away my eyes so I sleep tonight.

Good job! All the best, Debbie

5/5 excellent poem. its unlike anything i've read, i like to see different ones. keep writing i like what i've read

Nice write, short and to the point. I loved the way you opened it up in the begining. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

I returned the favor of reading yours i will add you to my favorites so I can read more.

Its really good, thats all i can say i liked everything about it.
skylee

Beautiful

Very nice write. Not your BEST, and i think the rhyming could've been a little more different...but other than that I really liked it. The whole idea of the stars and stuff was nice. Keep writing! take care.

` Liz =]
5/5

This is so tru

Hey great poem. Thanks for commenting on my poem. :-) Keep it up.

Good poem i really like itt

Well i agree with the rest of the members votes. this poem was excellent! well done.

5/5 David

I like it. It is just so interesting, I never really saw stars to be like what you described them to be.

I must say pretty good but like i said i judge people on how well its put together and you put it together in your own way and i cant take away for that the only thing i didnt see is that when i read it i felt nothing like it ment nothing to me i dont know why though... now i have to wonder if poems come from the soul basicly then you eather put no feeling into making this one or you have a feeling that i cant replicate to know how you felt when writing it but since im not going to take points away for that ill just give you... a five i was an exallent peom but i wont be this easy all the time
Mark

This poem was so sweet :D! You had an excellent choice of words as well! I've always loved stars, and you portrayed them with great truth. My favorite line was:

Gaurdians of the night protect me from staying up tonight

Great job, and thanks for the comment! Keep it up, 5/5

Hatori
The Illusionist