Wow! Very intense deep feelings in this piece. Imagery and word choices put this in a very dark read. Excellent job on portraing your emotions.

Hush, darling,
tighten your lips, don't drink the dead,
remember the sins that keep you fed.
Twisting in the agony of what had died,
you've stained reflection on the skies,
and all the tears that we have cried,
will be sucked back into our eyes.

These lines really paint a picture in your minds eye.
Take Care Cindy