Yes I did not understand it until the bottom. BUT! I could really see the girls pain and how she looks to the sun. It is a magnificent sight, but horrible because she is alone with the sun and nothing else.

Doug, that is not my profile anymore...my friends now uses that cuz hers no longer works, just a thought for you...and she has updated her profile now that I mentioned your comment, and she will be uploading her poems soon enough or else deleting the profile, she doesn't like uploading her poems because hers have gotten stolen before. Just fyi.

This is so beaautiful! it is really sad a touch and has such depth and meaning behind the words. the feel and atmosphere it creates is of immense sympathy and sadness, which i think is what you're trying to portray. a beautifully written, incredibly moving piece. xXx

Omg...stupid jealous downraters! this poem is so awesome! i had an image in my head the whole time.

Very well written!

5/5