I think your poem would be much better off if you had some punctuation at the end of each line =] Just a suggestion.

Anywho, onto the poem.

I'm not really sure what to think of this poem. For a strict structure regime, it was pretty good, however I think like all strictly structured poems, you fit the words into the style, and I never really liked poems that were fit into a strict pattern (including my own) because it is too forced.

But as to the words you used, eh, those are a little sketchy. I'm just not sure about this poem, cause it seemed to me that it was just one of the poems you did because the style seemed interesting.

It must be just me, because the people above me liked it.

But that's no matter,
I'm happy that you're in love,
and the poem is still excellent in putting forth that point.

I cannot give this a 5/5 because I feel it is not an excellent poem, because I was never that fond of the Italian sonnets. Don't worry, it's only opinionization and many people may truly love this poem =]