by sian Apr 20, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I fell to my knees with one painful gasp, |
by Devon
I love you poem! great stuff! |
by Tommygunn
Wow....very powerful. I really enjoyed it....excellent flow |
Luv it and i luv the flow through the poem |
Great poem had a nice flow great story told very well and wording was great ,keep up the great work, ~5/5 your friend Tracy |
by just me
I really like this poem, it is really good and you painted a picture for my mind. :) |