Love to me

by David b   Apr 20, 2007


Love to me is like a dream,
its here for a while then its flows down the stream.
The stream of hurt and tear's,
bringing back memories from past years.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I like this. 'Twas okay. But if I may suggest, you should expand it. It seems like a tercet of an even greater poem.
    But, even so, I think this short piece is frankly true and beautiful itself.
    all the best

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    I liked it a lot. It says a lot in just a few words. It's short and to the point but doesn't seem blunt as some short poems do. Still had beautiful flow and meaning. Take care xo

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