This is really sad and the simple structure is very effective, i loved the lines:

as she looks at herself
wondering if
her life was worth this

they were pretty amazing, such strong meaning

I think that this is amazingly strongly written....Share this with the club hun, so many there can relate....I was once like this, but I am a living proof that some day it will all be better, trust me....And if you ever need to talk, feel free to email me okay hun =0)

Love Sabrina

Excellent sad poem, it had a very good flow, and was well written. Thanks for coomenting on my poems, the more you do the more I will.

WOW this poem was truly great. it had so much feeling in it.