I Saw An Angel

by The Mr Simon   Apr 20, 2007


I saw an Angel today,
Eyes downcast, sitting still.
Her thoughts so far away,
She sat alone upon that hill.

A tired look, she displayed,
Showed burdened weariness.
A cruel hand, fate had played,
She sat alone in eerieness.

One day the gloom will end,
But she will tell you otherwise.
A smile, God will send,
To clear the water from her eyes.

* I wrote this about a girl called Nicole, she was very withdrawn and seemed impossible to cheer. I'll always love you Nicky : )
- The Mr Simon

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    You did an excellent job on this one. the flow was great, the word choice unmistakably amazing, and the emtions were strong and clear. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Thanks ^_^

    um....what's a stanza? O___o

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very heart touching write. Great job!

    One day the gloom will end,
    But she will tell you otherwise.
    A smile, God will send,
    To clear the water from her eyes.

    Love this stanza.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Thanks guys,

    I'm so glad you liked it : )
    Check out my other poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gypsy

    I really liked it, it had really good rhyme and rhythm

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