Don't worry i'll be fine

by Onoitsmandie   Apr 20, 2007


Don't worry I'll be fine
She says on the phone
For you know when you call her
She's home all alone

Don't worry we'll be fine
She whispers so sweetly
In to her siblings sleeping ears
Yet she does it discretely

Don't worry I'll be fine
She tells her self
Just a few more cuts
Then the razor goes back on the shelf

Don't worry I'll be fine
She can barley say
Her cuts were too deep
Her life ended this way.
By:Mandie Renee

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    A perfect example of someone hiding their feelings. Good poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow. very short but it gets to the point. i love it. maybe you can comment some my poems when u get the chance

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Aww a really sad poem, simple and haunting, very memorable. i liked the second stanza the best, the imagery in it was really beautiful and had such a sadness about it, well done

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