This is very dark.. but overall I definatly liked it. |
by N J Thornton
Coincidently I've just commented on an acrostic; how strange |
by firexdancer
Wow, even this poem would kinda scare me... but it was absolutely gorgeous... so beautifully penned and flowed so good. 5/5 for this. |
Wow, A nicely written beautiful dark poem. I liked the last stanza the best. Very vivid. 5/5 |
Hey, |
by Melpomene
I really enjoyed this poem, the title straight away caught my eye i really like it because i was thinking about using the same title only not as an acrostic poem. This poem you wrote was really dark. Loved the last line the most but the whole poem was amazing. Well done~mel |
by Lauren
Good work making in using the letters and still making a great poem |
by Kristina
Wow this is really good. i really enjoyed reading it very much. i think you did a really great job on writing it. 5/5 |
Very creepy and chilling babe! Love it! 5/5 |
Wow this poem was extremely dark. I loved it.. very nice job especailly with the acrostic style. You managed to follow it to a T and yet it didnt take away from the horror of your poem at all. |
by Jenni Marie
This is beautifully written. |
"Enfants lying quietly in a forever deepening sleep" |
by isabel
This poem really got me...I think acrostic poems are really hard to write...(i tried once...=D) but you just did it so good...i mean, it just blew me off, i just loved it... |
by Marc Ortiz
Lol you're really good at writing Acrostic poem! Fantastic work! keep writing! hihi I hope I will be as good as you someday in writing Acrostic poems! :D 5/5! |
That was really good, sweetie. |