The tittle dragged me in... its wonderful!!

Xcellent poem, and I honestly can relate i know how it feel to have your happiness depend on another soul. Well written, deep and heart touching....XJ

My pain sighted eyes = hmm, I don't quite understand that line.

realize it's not fair = realize THAT it's not fair (you need an extra syllable)

And in the last line, where the words "Quiet Storm" appear, I suggest that you put an ellipsis(...) after Quiet Storm, to keep the reader hanging kinda sorta.

Good job m'dear... I enjoyed this. I have some poems like this, and I know exactly how you feel when you wrote this.

Keep penning my dear, wonderful writes.

Oh yea, and please add grammar and capitalization in your poems. I am writing an article on the subject right now. When I post it, I hope you'll read it.

5/5
~Stephen White

Hey i wanted to thank you for reading my poems it means alot. i haven't had time to get on until now so i didn't want you to think i didn't care. thanx again and this poem is really good poem. shanik

That was such a great poem.I really like it.Keep up the goood work.

This is so good.
it really is. and im sure youve heard this enough but that just proves how good it is.
this is good like really good.
haha wow. i cant get over it
<3jess

This is beautiful. Very deep. I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work.
*Brittney

Very Strong! Kudos! :] I love it so much! Keep up the great work!

I love the poem for it, and it goes great with the poem..i like it.

I love the poem for it, and it goes great with the poem..i like it.