Comments : My Pathetic Song

  • 17 years ago

    by Angelena Branch

    I can tell that you are hurt and I can see the pain in it all very good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Unique write. I loved it it left me breathless each time i finished a line. One of my personal favorites.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Thats really cool. what is that form called?!

  • 17 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    I thought this poem was really good.Keep up the good work.