No one to anyone

by JaMeS   Apr 20, 2007


Its hard when your no one to anyone
its difficult to stay happy when you know its all fake
its hard to smile day in day out
and its near impossible to hold your head up high
when inside your falling to pieces

its like being in a room surrounded by people
but none of them actually caring who you are
while life is racing past so past your left crawling
crawling along with no one there to pick you up

its like your in the passenger seat just watching
powerless to stop your life being thrown away and leading no where on a journey to a future you know you'll regret
a future with no prospects, no opportunities and with no one actually there for you

and on that day when your most in need as life gets harder
in need of the friendly face
the obliging ear of someone listening and understanding
and the comfort of that persons arms around you
when you wouldn't do without her love

life bites again destroying all support around you
when times are harder it removes so called friends
removes chances of escape and help
leaving you alone

simply life doesn't give you a break or that shoulder
nor does it keep you warm when your cold
when your utterly alone
and when your no one to anyone

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  • 17 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Great use of similes,
    "while life is racing past so past your left crawling
    crawling along with no one there to pick you up"
    I liked how you brought the 'crawling' down onto the other line, it creates definition and emphasizes the emotion involved. Touching piece. Greta xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hmm...How many of us think like this? How many of us don't think like this? What should be done? ...

    "when times are harder it removes so called friends"
    I just LOVEd that line.
    It's actually looking at the better side of harder times :)

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    The nxt stanza was better then the rest:D
    freestylin all the way ..yewww:D
    keep it up :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Great poem. Reading the first stanza made me want to read more and more. You did a great job on this poem, very well-written 5/5 keep up the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Great poem. Reading the first stanza made me want to read more and more. You did a great job on this poem, very well-written 5/5 keep up the great work.