Great poem. Reading the first stanza made me want to read more and more. You did a great job on this poem, very well-written 5/5 keep up the great work.

Great poem. Reading the first stanza made me want to read more and more. You did a great job on this poem, very well-written 5/5 keep up the great work.

The nxt stanza was better then the rest:D
freestylin all the way ..yewww:D
keep it up :D

Hmm...How many of us think like this? How many of us don't think like this? What should be done? ...

"when times are harder it removes so called friends"
I just LOVEd that line.
It's actually looking at the better side of harder times :)

Great use of similes,
"while life is racing past so past your left crawling
crawling along with no one there to pick you up"
I liked how you brought the 'crawling' down onto the other line, it creates definition and emphasizes the emotion involved. Touching piece. Greta xo