by Afraid of the Dark Apr 20, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Red is the colour, |
by Amberinaa
I liked it, but it seemed kinda like it ended right in the middle.. I think with a bit of work it could be great. |
Excellent poem, well worded and a nice flow to it,you did a great job on this piece, it was written very well, with a lot meaning to it, keep it up. your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
by June
I think its a sweet little poem ,well done. |
by Startle Me
I loved this poem |
by Vanessa
Well written. Great flow, nicely pinned I love your choice of words. expecailly the poppy thing. (I can't remember things excatly long enough to quote what you wrote) 5/5 keep up the good work. |