by NashvilleBlues Apr 20, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Looking out my window, |
Wow, i really liked the metaphor of the window. It could have double meaning which is amazingly difficult to do for a writer to shw in a poem. Keep up the good work :D |
This was another good poem i am beginning to see your style now and it works well it flows nicely some of your timing is a lil out of place but otherwise fab |