Comments : My Window

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This was another good poem i am beginning to see your style now and it works well it flows nicely some of your timing is a lil out of place but otherwise fab

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow, i really liked the metaphor of the window. It could have double meaning which is amazingly difficult to do for a writer to shw in a poem. Keep up the good work :D

    xxx alex xxx