You Weren't There

by Christie   Apr 20, 2007


Scatter my ashes with a broken heart,
Tell only those who were torn apart,
None however, to let you down,
Crying emptying the resonant sound.

Yet with those tears left knives in miss,
Shuddering when leaving the unwelcomed bliss,
However, truth reveals its head,
So too the presence of life in death.

Significance spun in webs of deceit,
Where it with scorn in darkness meets,
But within those thoughts, shared memories paired,
If only you knew but you weren't there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Yup lol my old name was girlie goo now im smile lol so yer good poem again lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Real sweet i think i have already done this poem lol so if i have you have another comment lol....... yes well good poem none the less and it must be that good i read it twice lol. xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This was really good so sad the flow was well expressed good job :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem i think it was dark and eerey, I also liked how you portrayed these emotions in the poem. Your vocab seemed a little bit too common but other then that i found this to be a greatly written short piece. Well done~mel

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