I liked this poem i think it was dark and eerey, I also liked how you portrayed these emotions in the poem. Your vocab seemed a little bit too common but other then that i found this to be a greatly written short piece. Well done~mel

Great poem

This was really good so sad the flow was well expressed good job :D

Real sweet i think i have already done this poem lol so if i have you have another comment lol....... yes well good poem none the less and it must be that good i read it twice lol. xxx alex xxx

Yup lol my old name was girlie goo now im smile lol so yer good poem again lol