Wow,....again you are so talented! I have a quick question though...who is the one that makes you want to cut yourself? And i think i have an idea but when you get the chance, please call me or txt me who it is! xoxoxo luv ya snicklebritches! ~Pookeyboo!

Thankz for the comment i dont think im that good coz urs is like sooo much better... i love this one it really makes you feel!

Thanks for the comment!!!! your a great and very talented writer too!! :) need to talk email me or msg me!
amanda

Excellect poem!, i love the feel to this one. keep writing! 5/5 i wasnt sure which poem you wanted me to comment so i picked this one lol This one is very good. Keep up the good work

Thanks for you comment on my poem, but im not talented, you are!! This is amazing, i really love this poem!! 5/5. All your poems are so amazing, your really talented. Keep up the awesome work.
xoxo Abz xoxo

Great poem Lina, you write very well for your age. But your poem is so dark and forboding. Since we usually write from experience, I can tell you've had a painful past. I hope things are better for you now. well done.

I really like this poem it kinda tells how i used to be cuz i useed to cut my wrists or my arms almost everynight

I really like this poem it kinda tells how i used to be cuz i useed to cut my wrists or my arms almost everynight

Beautiful poem!...i loved it!...i can sooo relate!...very powerful 1!....Good wrk!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

OMG....u commented on one of my poems along time ago and asked me to comment on yours....i love this poem so much..
its deep and i full relate...jus got dumped by my boyfriend of 4 years....=(

I liked you poem allot!'
It sad, and i hope its not always like that!
You are good!
keep up!

I must say u r very talented 2 some of my poems flow really easy others are harder to get like my dear jesse one it took me about a month because i had so many feelings i kept deleting and rewriting but i liked the end product very good i like very much

Hey i like ur poem.... ur a ver y talented writer and poet! i hope that u feel better than when u rote this poem. anyway....i hope u get the chance 2 read and rate my poems

Lina - this is a very sad poem. I hope that you are managing to get over this person as no one is worth harming yourself and putting yourself through all this for. I know that at the time you feel like its taking the pain away to do that, but please talk to someone about this - its a very real danger and I dont want to see you feel so down that you think its the only way out.

Mo

xxx

Really a sweet piece.
keep it up !!!
5/5

You really have talent! Keep up the great work

Wow very good

I was doing a random reading and I came to see your profile and thought I'd take a look.
This was a great write, I admit it's touched me to the depth.

Pick up a knife,
slit my wrist.
For all the bad,
that I did.
This stanza reminds me of some other stanza in another poem, I don't remember the poem but I do remember liking it a lot ;)

Don't be afraid,
to continue on.
Go deeper and deeper,
until you're gone.
This stanza was my fave, I hate to say "I can relate, I know how this feels" cuz actually everyone has gone through his own pain and no one can relate to it any single bit...But I think this one was truly touching, I do feel numb nowadays and I wish to be brave to hold the knife, but we all know it's not a good thing.
Well done on this one.

Me out of your life,
me out of your dreams,
me out of your future,
me out of your schemes.
I kinda have to criticize this stanza, I didn't really like the repetition in it, it wasn't that bad, though could've been written in a better way =]

I enjoyed this piece a lot hun, I totally love fast-paced poems, they're usually so meaningful.
Write on
Best of luck =]