A heavy though on a heavy mind

by firexflys   Apr 20, 2007


*A heavy though on a heavy mind*

I wish the shadows would die out
And this sad girl no longer would pout
I though you understood what I said
But no that was all in my head

You couldnt give a care with how I felt
You have no idea how easily you make me melt
A kiss from your lips
And a ride along my hips

You get me to the point of letting go
How much more do I need to let you know?
I tried to hold it all back
But it hits me like a heavy attack

Like a heavy thought on a heavy mine
That wont go away at anytime
I want to make you happy
But not in doing so make me unhappy

Firexfly
April 20, 2007
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  • 17 years ago

    by melissa

    Lovely writing,
    Can really feel the pain
    Good job. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this one...the sadness pulled me in straight away and it really tugs at the reader's heart.
    The only suggestion I have for this is to try and eliminate some of the fillers (you, I, the, and etc) as it improves the flow greatly.