I don't think it sucked. this one is really good, keep up the good work 5/5

Oh my wow.
I love this :]
The only criticsm I have on this one is.
Try not to use so much pronouns.
i.e. "I, you" blah like that.

Use your anger to fuel the fires of your poetic passion. lighting a flame for all to see and no one to quench

your servant:
david