Personally, I feel the scaling of the poem was a bit off...buuuut that's not a big matter here. This poem was great...a little long but I loved it. I like the story it told...kept me wondering what was gonna happen next.. and the ending was perfect. At first I didnt see what the title had to do with the poem but then I read the last stanza...and yeah. Very good write. Keep writing!! 5/5

` Liz =]