by Curry Apr 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
This is it, |
Aww this is the cutest poem ever.. definity my favorite.. i especially love the first couple of lines.. they were excellent.. the short choppy lines were sweet and elemetnal.. but it words because its like a first love.. fantastic poem.. |
by Jenni Marie
Ohhh this was so pretty! |
by Teria
I liked it. This was a tad bit overused, I liked out it was repeated a lot, but I think it was repeated a bit too much. Other than that you did a great job with this poem. The emotions were pretty good, along with the flow. |
by Austin
This poem is filled with so much emotion...unlike the other one this is full of joy and happiness...wonderful to read...5/5 |
There was a lot of emotion in this poem. |