Nice poem Curry =) I really enjoyed reading it! It left a good feeling inside my heart.. I wish somebody cares for me as much as this guy does for you in this poem. Keep up the good work! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

There was a lot of emotion in this poem.
However I think you could of done more with it.
4/5

[Sarah]

This poem is filled with so much emotion...unlike the other one this is full of joy and happiness...wonderful to read...5/5

I liked it. This was a tad bit overused, I liked out it was repeated a lot, but I think it was repeated a bit too much. Other than that you did a great job with this poem. The emotions were pretty good, along with the flow.
keep it up.
<3 Teria.

Ohhh this was so pretty!
I really liked the repetition you used in this, I thought it had impact, and all the way through reading the poem, I was smiling.
The flow was good throughout and the ending was such a perfect way to wrap up.

Aww this is the cutest poem ever.. definity my favorite.. i especially love the first couple of lines.. they were excellent.. the short choppy lines were sweet and elemetnal.. but it words because its like a first love.. fantastic poem..