Great poem. Full of emotions keep up the wonderful work:)
5/5

This one was also full of emotion.
Maybe you should try putting it in stanza's.
Just a suggestion.
4/5

[Sarah]

What a hateful poem...you must be truly mad. Wonderful read though. 5/5

The pain screams through the words in this.
I thought there seemed to be quite a few fillers, which disrupted the flow at times.
Also, the structure threw me at times, maybe try putting it into stanzas?
Apart from that, I really enjoyed this.