Because of You

by Curry   Apr 21, 2007


I've felt so much hurt and pain,
In the past year.
There's one guy that I have to blame,
For every tear and every fear.

I thought you were my one and only,
I was so in love with you.
I never thought you would leave me here all depressed and lonely,
You made me believe you loved me too.

I trusted your dumba**,
And believed every lie.
Then you just shattered my heart like glass,
And made me cry.

Because of you I'm so afraid,
Afraid to fall in love.
Look at this big mess you've made,
I thought I was your "blessing from above."

Thats what you said,
And thats what I believed.
You made good thoughts run through my head,
Now they're only hateful and deceived.

Because of you I cant trust,
I'm afraid I might get told another lie.
Not believing guys is now a must,
I'm afraid they'll only end up making me cry.

Because of you I'm afraid to love again,
Afraid of getting another broken heart.
Then my heart might never mend,
And I'll have nothing left to do but fall apart.

Because of you my life is a living hell,
And it's slowly coming to an end.
Because of you I know well,
That I will never fall in love again.

Written by: Curry on 4.20.07

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww this is soo sad.. wonderful job though.. you were very vivid about your feelings which really helped me as the reader understand your pain.. the only thing i didnt like was when you used the word "dumba**" it seems unnecesarry you can write with much more power and more beautifully if you choose another word :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Faded

    Because of you my life is a living hell,
    And it's slowly coming to an end.
    Because of you I know well,
    That I will never fall in love again.

    tht is one of my favorite stanzas ever, great job and keep up the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wonderful write. I mean I know the feeling well, but I would like to point out that just when you think you will never find love again, you will. Great word choice, amazing flow, and strong emtions 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    It was a good poem.
    I believe that you had a lot to say
    But
    There was too much going on
    It wasn't consistent
    In this part
    I was so in love with you.
    I never thought you would leave me here all depressed and lonely,
    The flow was really unsteady.
    What I try to do sometimes
    Is that I count the syllabuls
    And I try to get the whole stanza
    Close to that syllabul.
    Or something else I do
    Is that I space at every
    Pause
    For example
    Instead of I ate crackers
    I ate... crackers would look like
    I ate
    Crackers

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was really cute because it showed how much you cared for a certain guy but overall its very sad and deep. Strong feelings were put into this poem. Great work here. Well done ~mel

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