Wow i can relate to this poem! i know just how this feels. it's sad, but you did a great job writing this! 5/5

~Kristina

This was really cute because it showed how much you cared for a certain guy but overall its very sad and deep. Strong feelings were put into this poem. Great work here. Well done ~mel

It was a good poem.
I believe that you had a lot to say
But
There was too much going on
It wasn't consistent
In this part
I was so in love with you.
I never thought you would leave me here all depressed and lonely,
The flow was really unsteady.
What I try to do sometimes
Is that I count the syllabuls
And I try to get the whole stanza
Close to that syllabul.
Or something else I do
Is that I space at every
Pause
For example
Instead of I ate crackers
I ate... crackers would look like
I ate
Crackers

Wonderful write. I mean I know the feeling well, but I would like to point out that just when you think you will never find love again, you will. Great word choice, amazing flow, and strong emtions 5/5

Because of you my life is a living hell,
And it's slowly coming to an end.
Because of you I know well,
That I will never fall in love again.

tht is one of my favorite stanzas ever, great job and keep up the great work.

Aww this is soo sad.. wonderful job though.. you were very vivid about your feelings which really helped me as the reader understand your pain.. the only thing i didnt like was when you used the word "dumba**" it seems unnecesarry you can write with much more power and more beautifully if you choose another word :D