Fall Apart

by Curry   Apr 21, 2007


Shes been lied to,
Used,
Discriminated,
and abused.
Lately everyone hates her,
And she has no clue why.
She doesn't know what to do,
Except be depressed and cry.
Shes doesn't feel real,
She feels so dead.
Her broken heart wont heal,
She just wants to put a gun to her head.
The cuts on her arm increase everyday,
Her life cant get any worse.
All the bad things wont go away,
It's like shes nothing but a curse.
She sit on her bed in confusion,
While tears start to fall from her eyes.
She thinks "Why is my life such a delusion,"
"Why is it filled with hatred and lies?"
She starts to cut again and again,
While more hate for herself fills her heart.
She wants so bad for her life to end,
But until it does,she'll just continue to fall apart.

Written by: Curry on 4.20.07

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Well penned.

    Very descriptive, and laced with a longing to be loved. It flowed nicely, and the length was just write. I really enjoyed this.
    keep it up,
    5/5 Elaine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Faded

    I loved it, the emotions that were in it and the whole story that it told im sure alot of people can relate to, which is sad. i think u deserve a 5/5 for this one

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god,
    how great is this poem, very emotional with a strong meaning.....
    you have done a great job.......
    keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I loved how you spaced things out.
    You don't know how many times
    I told people about this kind of format.
    It's beautiful :]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This one is one of the best ones I have read from you so far. Amazing. well pinned, nice flow, excellent choice in words. I love the way you write. 5/5

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