Wow this poem is sooo sad, and i feel like you wrote it about me. it flowed so nicely. you did a great job writing it. 5/5

~Kristina

I really liked this poem i think the emotion was great throughout it and held the poem together greatly. Strong poem you have here. Well done on a nicely penned poem. ~mel

'Elloooo. :]

This was good but your structure changed from the begininging to the end and I think if you kept that constant it would make the flow better.
Thats just my opinion.
It was still a good wirte, & your flow was pretty good.

So, well done =)

This one is one of the best ones I have read from you so far. Amazing. well pinned, nice flow, excellent choice in words. I love the way you write. 5/5

I loved how you spaced things out.
You don't know how many times
I told people about this kind of format.
It's beautiful :]
5/5

Oh god,
how great is this poem, very emotional with a strong meaning.....
you have done a great job.......
keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

I loved it, the emotions that were in it and the whole story that it told im sure alot of people can relate to, which is sad. i think u deserve a 5/5 for this one

Well penned.

Very descriptive, and laced with a longing to be loved. It flowed nicely, and the length was just write. I really enjoyed this.
keep it up,
5/5 Elaine.