by Kali Apr 21, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
family
My dad is my hero |
by dawn green
Very nice poem! keep up the good work! |
by Debbie
Aside from the technical errors, I find this piece rather cute. I thoroughly can correlate with it because my father is my best friend. It is a nice read. I can only suggest that maybe applying a consistent line meter will enhance the flow? Anyway, I like this poem very much! |