Comments : What You caused....

  • 17 years ago

    by AnDrEa

    This is really good

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Okay Andrea :) hehehe I have a friend = Andrea too and it's her bday! anyway what a coincidence..

    Okay I know the feeling Andrea is it your first love? anyway my advice for you.. forget him. He's not worth your tears. There are a lot of guys out there that's better.. so don't feel sad :) always smile.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    And one more thing don't ever hurt yourself again.. in the end you'll regret it. :) TC

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Oh wow this was sad:[ but good poem. i gave it a 4/5 because it wasnt one of the greatest.but it reminds me of one of my friends and i love poems i can relate to. keep up the good work and you will get better.

  • 17 years ago

    by AnDrEa

    Thanks usually people dont really get my peoms excipte yall and one boy ... thanks for reading my poems..he wasnt my first love he was my second but my first love made me feel like i need to die but that boy told me not to because it was not worth it... :'(

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Don't kill yourself :P think first who'll get affected.. 1. Family 2. Friends.. :) remember always smile :) actually I'm having a hard time moving on too.. but hey.. we're still young :) just learn from your mistakes :)

  • 17 years ago

    by AnDrEa

    Thanks i will try to smile.. :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by julia

    Hey! well ur poem is good too! i have the same reasons to start writing poetry as u! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by AnDrEa

    Thats good!!! i love to write i can express my feelings..

  • 17 years ago

    by AnDrEa

    Well the guy that broke my heart is trying to go back in my life but theres another one and im so confused ?!?!?!?! :'( or :-)
    ////AnDrEa \\\\\\

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Your ex is trying to get back to you?? don't.. lol. because think about it he's gonna hurt you again sooner or later..