Comments : Fuzzy feeling

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    I like the flow on this one but you do need to re read it ur missing an ('ed) in the last part and an (s) in another other wise great job

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    He's a lucky guy poem is awesome
    5/5 like all yours cy

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Here tis a shame that he broke up with me!
    xx