VERY VERY VERY GOOD! One of the best pieces from you. The last stanza packed a powerful punch! WOW! That was good Gem. I'm impressed!
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Gem
What a great poem. The story it tells is a very sad one.

The little girl steps back to examine her work
Her pictures spread out on the grey rock
She's told her life story across the ground
Drawn with her trusty blue chalk

I really like the way you ended this.
Take Care Love Cindy

Comment #4~
Ok seriously...you are one of the most talented writers I've ever encountered! That was SO extremely powerful, I can't even describe how amazing that was. And how it flowed so well. And the idea, my fingers are at a loss here at the keys, trying to describe how beautiful this was. I mean seriously, Gem, I'm not just being melo-dramatic! This was such a beautiful piece. You should be very proud of this one!
~Midnight Sun

I have nothing to say for this, serously this is really good, the words, the everything, you should write a poem book and publish i cuz i know for sure if you did, it would be a #1 hit =) 5/5

This is a tear-jerking work, Gem. Really. I never thought this was merely written for a contest.
Wonderful, as always.
Love,
Debbie

This was such a tear jerker gem. but as I must agree with most people that is one of the best pieces from you and you are one of the most talented writers on this site. wow what a great job and as sad as it was it explained everything with great detail and made ie that much more amazing
6/5
xoxoxoxo

This was such a tear jerker gem. but as I must agree with most people that is one of the best pieces from you and you are one of the most talented writers on this site. wow what a great job and as sad as it was it explained everything with great detail and made ie that much more amazing
6/5
xoxoxoxo