Uncertain Response

by sHaTTeReD4SiLeNcE   Apr 21, 2007


Am I the light that you seek?
The light you claim to give you life?
The light that gives you hope in where you dwell?
You've been in the dark for so long...
Led astray by the brilliance of your beloved star,
Blinded and came within mine...

Am I the star that you are looking for?
Or just a stand-in for the one you lost?
My light is dim compared to your precious star
Obsolete, mediocre and damned in existence
I may just be a mere replica of the one you seek
Since it can never be yours once again...
08/16/06

P.S.
I wrote this in response to "My Darkest Fear" which was given to me, this is part 1. I just want to post it even though it's lame.

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  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    This is absolutely un-lame sweety! I loved it! the flow was off, but it in a way worked out for you! You're very talented. Keep it up! Cannot wait for part two!

    -Liz-
    ~muahs to all~

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