Lovely free verse poem.
You could get so many different meanings from this...
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Beautifully written ,i really liked it.Thank you for the comment on mine.Keep writing ,I look forward to reading more from you.take care.

I loved this poem. I love nature poems:) Nice one. 5/5

Loved this poem...id love to see longer ones though!...beatifully written though and good job!!

This was great. Emotions run every part of our lives and they need to be expressed. You do this well. *5/5*

Alyson