Friday Night Beauty Queen

by Noir   Apr 21, 2007


African embroiled pearls mixed sequin black
Leaving the throne of home and into the prom
Dark chocolate Amazon exotic smiling timid;
Holding bouquets of blue roses and birds of paradise

A carriage awaited her with a her white colored penguin
Kneeling to his queen, a kiss to her hand
Looking up to see, head looking--cheeks turned pinkish brown
A rare beauty captivated the white penguin so..

The carriage lands its end--loud music and laughter awaits
An alarmed silence wafts through the room--
All leering to their queen;
Plump children with arrows stung

A sense of pride came over the white penguin
He had the goddess of chocolate--touching
Elements of four--marveled at the goddess
Lending their power to make her Friday saccharine

Oh how the sick mother earth was proud:
Her daughter truly had awe-inspiring hours of darkness

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    That's so deep and strange but... It's great... what a weird thought... very interesting anyway... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Thats quite nice for a poem very descriptive but I don't see why its about life. Anyways its very descriptive and fascinatingly fictional.

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    Woooooooooooooow!!
    love it indeeeeeeeeeeed :)

    yours,
    ~gIrL~

  • 17 years ago

    by purplified

    Yea I really enjoyed reading that and agree with with the above very powerful and unreal and truly fascinating =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mo

    Shit, thats unreal.

    Could picture it all as it was happening. I like random pieces like that. It reminds me of a poem I wrote once called "She left him with half a glass of milk and a ham sandwich"... quite random stuff makes it more interesting.

    Cheers
    Mo