by Giovanni Apr 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
"The sky is darkened by black clouds |
The words are what caught my attention. Imagery was nice and sharp. At the middle-end there felt a little unraveling but not overly so. The end stopped on a strong note. |
by Gasttlee
Dark, sad and excellent overall! 5/5 |
by Vanessa
I really like your choice of words, it was amazing. 5/5 Keep up the good work |
Omgosh...that...that was amazing. im so bewilderd...it was....wow. i have never read anything so deep. Great Job....it deserves a 100/5 but i cant give that so ill settle for a 5. awesome poem! |