Omgosh...that...that was amazing. im so bewilderd...it was....wow. i have never read anything so deep. Great Job....it deserves a 100/5 but i cant give that so ill settle for a 5. awesome poem!

I really like your choice of words, it was amazing. 5/5 Keep up the good work

Dark, sad and excellent overall! 5/5

The words are what caught my attention. Imagery was nice and sharp. At the middle-end there felt a little unraveling but not overly so. The end stopped on a strong note.
~Faith-less