You'll Never See

by Kristina   Apr 21, 2007


My life is screwed up,
But you'll never see,
You'll never know,
What it's like to be me.

You only see,
What I chose to show you,
You don't know the real me,
The lies I keep locked up inside.

All the secrets I hide,
You'll never know,
Cause you'll never understand,
What I've been through.

I wear a fake smile upon my face
And act like nothing is wrong,
I will never let you see,
That my world has fallen apart.

Copyright © May 20, 2005 - Kristina M
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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This was a great poem
    my faovrite by you in fact

    nice job
    and when it rhymed it
    rhymed really well

    great job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    >.<''
    Cliche.

    Now.
    I wouldn't have given this poem a four if you hadn't have f'ed up the rhyme scheme.
    You went from a,b,c,b to a,b,a,c to a,b,c,d to a,b,c,b.

    Sure. Poetry is about letting yourself write and letting the feelings out. But let's do it with some composer.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by gabriella

    Very deep, i loved it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I'd only give this poem a four out of five, because I felt while the flow was good within the stanzas, it was shaky while going from one to another. You used very nice, raw vocabulary however, so 4/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    True. Nobody knows what
    other have been through.
    So no body knows each others
    pain. Keep it up! God Bless
    5/5
    <3Tayy^__^ily

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